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 Post subject: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem
 Post Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:41 pm 
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Following is a link to my Halloween poem entitled: Whole World Hidden - Comments appreciated. -- Thanks!

http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1082037/whole_world_hidden_a_halloween_poem.html

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 Post subject: Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem
 Post Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 8:41 pm 
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GREAT poem. One of the best Halloween poems I've read, and I've read a lot.

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 Post subject: Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem
 Post Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:08 pm 
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Well thank you very much. :o That's about the nicest compliment I could have hoped for.

Happy Halloween!

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 Post subject: Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem
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That was fantastic!

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 Post subject: Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem
 Post Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 7:56 pm 
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Wow thats amazing! :D

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 Post subject: Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem
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That poem was very entertaining. I love to read independent writers works and that was quite a piece of art. Loved it. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem
 Post Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2008 12:34 pm 
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wow that was awesome you're a great writer :D

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 Post subject: Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem
 Post Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2008 9:58 pm 
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Thanks again, everyone for your comments. It's good to get feedback and even better when it's positive.

Happy Halloween!

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